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The story is great. However, I would suggest to correct two mistakes:
standing there mute, without any sign of movement.
Next morning the children were surprised to find their old snowman
Best regards
Joachim Beyer
achimbey@kabelbw.de
standing there mute, without any sign of movement.
Next morning the children were surprised to find their old snowman
Best regards
Joachim Beyer
achimbey@kabelbw.de
Réponse par Karl Wiener (12.12.2008):
Hi Joachim, thank you for the suggestions, hoping to get more advice concerning others of my stories.
Kind regards, Karl
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