29.11.2006
Catégorie "Général" (Poèmes en anglais)
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Bonnie Brooke

The Seashell

She swam in a salt dress of silver,

naked as a kept truth.

I adored her from the dune

watching from times death

my time of life,

contemplating love

and how it feels to hollow shells

once it fills the void.

She surfaced from a shelf wave

dropping diamonds from her hair,

holding a shell which she pressed on my palm

saying:

"Princess Seahorse, you once enjoyed
a stroking naked truth like this,
and afterwards a raptured, loosened calm."

Thank you, dear Editor :-)Commentaire d´auteur

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....saying:
"Princess Seahorse, you once enjoyed
A stroking naked truth like this,
And afterwards a raptured, loosened calm."

TigerFish30.11.2006

and yr editor wonders what has happened to change yr style of late

TigerFish01.12.2006

what then?

TigerFish01.12.2006

My Writer should not think that just beacuse her Editor is silent he does not notice what she has done. Erica was printed out hours ago and is being taken home for perusals over the weekend

TigerFish01.12.2006

Yr Editor is delighted but caught clean off his guard, noba, seeing only as his Writer brings the matter up, he has been wrestling with the practicalites of reaching his Writer in connection with Christmas; he was (as she knows) proposing to rek tijd by delaying matters until 3 March.
He does feel compelled, by his Writer's message, to growl (Grr) at her, albeit in the manner of an ineffectual lion that's just had a close encounter with a dental vet

TigerFish01.12.2006

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